It looks like subsection 11.2.2 should be a subsection of 11.2.1 ELSE it is a non-sequitur.
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:43PM on page 23
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I don't believe that the Municipal "shall" ensure that the process are "easily understood". I think it should be "should ensure" as the words "easily understood" are subjective and could be used against the Election Administrator in a court case.
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:39PM on page 22
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Add a definition for "vulnerability assessment".
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:35PM on page 21
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Add a definition for "chronological systems log".
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:32PM on page 21
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Add a definition for "audit log".
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:29PM on page 21
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Add a definition for "open-ended adversarial testing".
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:27PM on page 21
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Add a definition for "authorized representative".
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:24PM on page 20
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Add definition for CVD.
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:19PM on page 20
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"Voters concerned" is awkward and doesn't contain the possessive of "voter".
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:08PM on page 18
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"Authenticated administrators" is not defined and is not consistent wording.
June Jan 6 2026 at 4:03PM on page 17
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Add a definition for "verbose access logging" and possibly remove the word "verbose" as it is subjective.
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:58PM on page 17
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There is ambiguity with the word contest - a contest in an election context is an entity not a period of time. If it means the entity, then it should specify that the "contest has been voted".
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:44PM on page 16
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Standardization of remote and external hackers.
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:43PM on page 16
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Add a definition for "privileged administrators".
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:38PM on page 15
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Add a definition for "penetration", "exfiltration", and "eavesdropping" as they are used in several areas in the body but not defined.
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:29PM on page 15
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Move the definition of "tampering" to the Definition Section, especially since tampering is used in another section (11.2.6) as well.
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:27PM on page 15
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Move the definition of "social engineering" to the definition section.
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:26PM on page 15
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Move the definition of DoS and DDoS to definitions.
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:25PM on page 15
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Move definition to definitions - especially since the word malware is used elsewhere in the body.
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:23PM on page 15
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Move definition to definitions
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:21PM on page 14
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Shouldn't the "External Threat Actors" be defined above and then can simply be referenced in the body? Should we put a fine point on it and say "outcome" as well?
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:15PM on page 14
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The definition of "eligible" contains as scope limitation sentence. There should be consistency with "eligible" and "entitled".
June Jan 6 2026 at 3:12PM on page 14
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"Electoral Technology" is not defined and "robust is subjective and not defined (would perhaps be better put in the body if "robust" was going to be needed. Additionally, the word "correct" is really not what we are going for - it would be better to use wording in line with the Principles of the MEA.
June Jan 6 2026 at 2:59PM on page 14
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The definition does not explain what the agreement would be for.
June Jan 6 2026 at 2:57PM on page 13
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The word "all" is problematic. Just because something has been patched doesn't mean it has patched all known flaws - it could be for one of the flaws.
June Jan 6 2026 at 2:54PM on page 13
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Currently no reference to the provider being a software or technology provider (i.e. could be consulting services or a "provider of votes" as it is written.)
June Jan 6 2026 at 2:52PM on page 13
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Currently no reference to the provider being a software or technology provider (i.e. could be consulting services or a "provider of votes" as it is written.)
June Jan 6 2026 at 2:38PM on page 12
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Not clear why there is an emphasis on efficiency in this definition.
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